Patrick Sweeney
traveling the astral plane of Bacall's blue exhalation
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never having been to war I dance as they shoot at my feet
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first the dinosaurs and then the aunts and uncles
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so lost I sat down on the curb and waited
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petroglyphs and saber-toothed tigers I don't have a phone
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red maple leaf let me stop you right there
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he wants to know if he could fill the application out at home
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he likes equations in which all the solutions are painted shut
Patrick Sweeney is a writer of short form poetry, who delights in jotting down the insignificant thoughts and images that constitute the lowly, livelong day.
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2 Comments:
Thoughtful and thought-provoking work.
Bacall blue will go down in history as SULTRY.
Thanks, Patrick.
Thanks, Patrick, for your kind comment about my work. I enjoyed reading your pieces in Otoliths and in Synchronized Chaos -- a new online journal to me. Be well, Kit
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